Warrior Princess

Haha wow, you totally nailed the Anglo-Saxon style in all its mad glory. 'Twas a bit long and I think it would have fit better in Narrative or Dramatic poetry, ...

Before I say anything else, let me say that this is a beautiful poem and I really enjoyed it. Your imagery is lovely, as is your splendid evocation of mood ...

As I walked through the garden As the morning glories opened their violet arms And the nightshades fell asleep The sun rose Glanced upon me with her dew-bright eyes Amid ...

Beginning and ending Dawn breaking from the veils of starless night The darkness of eons Bloody waves on the sands of time High above the broken earth Voices of the ...

Oooooohhhhhh, I like this! Your imagery is lovely, and really carries the vivid yet dreamlike feeling of the poem well. I especially like the second stanza. My only quibble is ...

How dare you say the poem is bad??!! Methinks that's a bit uncalled for. It's not bad at all, just somewhat tangled. Stream of concsiousness rarely focuses on what one ...

I have been silent for the last time: Now I will speak, and you will hear me. All these years I've been helpless; All these years you've tied me down. ...

The best element of this poem (and it does have several good elements) is the tense, visceral, and dare I say masculine tone and style. One can easily distinguish it ...

I am cold, Even when I burn; I am heartless, Even in my heartache. It's not your fault, But I make you think it is. In this twisted mind of ...

Don't question what we've taught you; Don't try to understand; Some were made to lead, and some to follow; We are the head, and you the hands. It is the ...

The word that I think best describes this poem (if it can really be called a poem, considering its highly prose-like style), is manic. It certainly does follow the stream-of-consciousness ...

I'm thrilled that my fellows writers like my little sample chapter. I do apologize for the somewhat confusing plot; I guess my explanation at the beginning didn't avail much. :( ...

Whoooooooaaaa. This is some serious awesomeness here. To be honest, I really hate to waltz in and write a gushing review for a poem that is already on the "Featured ...

This is a sample chapter from a novel I'm working on. Since it might be a little confusing if you jump right into it, I'll give a little backstory: Lila ...

Yet another essay assignment for AP English! This summer we read "Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass," (one of the most inspiring and visceral books I've ever encountered). Recently ...